Son.He knows thousand leaves to aren't the most suitable to match his and then isn't the most suitable to match his, he knows that they will definitely break up in the future everywhere a kind of mood that will soon leave is treating thousand leaves.
If I thousand leaveses absolutely give him a palm!Even if I know he also for the sake of thousand leaf good.
== I~I~I~, I again disorderly concussion.Cough, the original mood has a little hasty Zao, isn't because this so just feel special angry?
1 are to see too clearly, the another is too dull, shake head, just just.
Cough, in fine, I am to dislike someone an I know everything of appearance.Especially be oneself doesn't know anything of time.= =
Is above!
PS:Sen, don't care mine "crazy words beard words" too much(sweat, that did you still write stem?!).My battle wears a person familiar easily unbridled.In fine, the author is the biggest!Oneself writes great good!= =
Write:One square is too pre-eminent possible to be really not so good ＾＾ forest recreation class 2004/06/1109:58
However, remember seeing a words before, in a certain love, it is pre-eminent to by all means have an one party, this person would predominate the direction of this feelings.
I sometimes like many farmlands very much and sometimes hate him very much, Mo.In fact is an author, can not embrace the mindset of this kind of mightiness, should be a little bit more more objective to treat the person that each one appears, sweat.
This novel already completes 1/3 at least, is also say, the most happy the part about wants to end.Meanwhile, many pre-eminent farmlands will also gradually fade out.He has already done the male leading role of 41 chapters, should also the torrent current was brave to back, let other boys expressed for a while in good time, sweat.
Write:I have an unreasonable demand ＾＾ .This novel probably has already written to 1/3, is also the most happy the part to about want to end.You can I ask you to write a book review?Is very hard very malicious brick all right, sweat.I don't know that always, I will can't give you 1 kind seem not too can listen to into the felling of the opinion and the suggestion, in fact and probably isn't such, for the reader's opinion and suggestion, I generally all really value, will also accept very with a single eye.Just the person arrived a certain age and seemed to be for very difficult change oneself, even if know that oneself is getting wronger, also seeming will be placed in a kind of inability as dint and wait helplessly for the end of terrible status, Mo.Certainly, if you is too busy, or really didn't feel, that even if.This was originally the matter ＾ for canning not be forced ＾ .The forest recreation class& amp;lt;6-1108:54& amps;gt;
Read:[Essence]I can say that I will definitely write of, but can not give you an accurate time, detailed reason, I left a message for you.At least next week look over in detail again hereafter would start to write.You can tell me, why want to write in detail to be a ?Because frankly speaking, I habitually write prose and really spread-the thinking jump up, thought of what say what, have no orderly.It is completely degage but talk.So want to make me know the words of target, so I can write of aim at sex more already.no61 <6-11 10:02>
Write:Sweat, has no necessity to act with due care and respect, a long statement, I just think in this stage time, can get some of your opinions and suggestion ＾＾ .In the book review area, 240 words in then ＾＾ .You don't put too much in the mind, thought of what speak all right.Never the wave take a lot of time to conceive outline a prescribed-form text with energy so-called and regular book review, that probably didn't°yet what net value ＾＾ .Is another:Leave a message for you.The forest recreation class& amp;lt;6-1110:31& amps;gt;
Read: [Essence]have a lot of words to mean to say, however always could not write again each time.1/the possible feeling Be getting tooer many, talks phrase and cans not remember clearly.2/certainly I am very lazy to is also fact.3/this 240 book review standards are also reason.Today feeling concerning book arrive nothing important, only strange, you everyday 0:00 sleeping, get up at 8:00......no61 <6-11 10:42>
Read: [Essence]deliver a problem in advance, original this problem would not° until wait your chapter 42 to announce hereafter say of ……advanced now for the time being be is the book review of the coda of article in the high school.1/if 42 chapters and 41 times connect with each other a development, this problem is getting more nonexistent, is also say if still have the words in the third year.2/if is a jump up type, is also say the words of direct beginning university article, have breaking of a year the layer among them is a recollection type to put preface to moreover hand over to treat of words, so the coda of chapter 41 have a little careless.If the words that can not do to hand over to treat more plus an apostrophe at least.no61 <6-11 10:51>
Write:Mo, article in the high school still has second volume.So, is nonexistent you the problem for saying.I originally also wanted to change to recount a way for a while, however, still feel this exactly like, next do again to lately try ＾ of ＾ .The forest recreation class& amp;lt;6-1110:55& amps;gt;
Read: [Essence]suggest a few opinions again:1/you really can not compare with writing to the usage technique of punctuation mark.The very small punctuation mark in fact can also express many can not the meaning of speech.Hope you can spend some times to cut and polish for a while.Is the most basic:Apostrophe, dash mark, exclamation mark and question mark.The article that sees you hardly uses comma, period, colon and quotation mark, outside of punctuation mark, so sometimes the article middleman thing facial expression the mindset not too and easily make the reader control.2/you speak amiss a mistake towards partitioning linear of making use of, canning not, but will never be correct usage method.Absolutely to the situation of misuse ……certainly although misuse can also make people bear with, however I see partition lines all have the felling to grow a hard speech each time.The not yet finished needs continuous no 61& amps;lt;6-1111:02& amps;gt;
Read:[Essence]continuously up.Result you all use in evening and of daytimes sometimes up.In the evening sleeping then have a class in the daytime, this is also continuous, don't need to partition line to let the conversion that people adapt to space for time.Certainly use last can't use, either what great problem, only have a little a wasted felling, the writing can not waste sign is also similar.no61 <6-11 11:07>
Write: In the crazy sweat.The punctuation mark sees to me really be good friends with a good research for a while, probably I the knowledge in this aspect since the childhood has blemish.As for partition line, I also feel that I has the power of misuse, Mo.Because I always worry reader will because of point of departure the formatting method like this can not read my novel as usual.I sometimes also see the formatting method of the point of departure and the partition line of the oneself confused usage by the reader's status by myself and still keep canning not finding good point to be attended to, the behind will fight for more reasonably making use of to partition line ＾＾ more naturally.The forest recreation class& amp;lt;6-1111:13& amps;gt;
Read and write six of the contactseses
《On the dark river 》 reads and writes six of the contactseses:(Read a reader;Write an author ＾＾ )
Read:Net friend:Circle commentary:《On the dark river 》 beats a cent:10 announce time:2004-06-11 11:35:15
Never make thousand leaves standing alone, be like her person like this, feelings is duller, but again self-confident, optimistic,Beats by Dr Dre solo, enthusiasm, who regardless all together will be happy, so, must are happy for thousand nights, let those persons who are self-approbation and don't keep Zhao to feelings regret the whole life.
Is another:The sorrow don't definitely written, the life originally would look for happy.
Write:Net friend:Forest recreation class commentary:《On the dark river 》 beats a cent:5 announce time:2004-06-12 23:16:08
The sweat sees with my standpoint, many farmlands will probably don't necessarily regret in the future, after all, have no person is necessary to another person.However, thousand leaves should be being not standing alone is eventually old, otherwise, I so hard write her life in decade, where is the value ?As for is sad, I never write truely
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